Him
I love him and he loves me
But we both know we cannot be
Our relationships together never last
They come and go all so fast
It's hard to be friends with lust in our eyes
And I know if we act upon it, it will end in lies
Being around him is such a pleasurable pain
I need to leave him before he drives me insane
But I can't let go, I'll never be free
Because my love for him will always be part of me
As promised another poem about missing my beloved ex. You know most normal people write hate poems about their ex boyfriends/girlfriends, but not me. I guess that's because I'm still friends with Morgan (and because I'm unwillingly madly in love with him). Yeah so this poem is much more true about my relationship with Morgan, compared to my last poem about him. I don't like this one so much just because it doesn't flow very well, but that's because I was on my period and trying desperately to make things ryhme. As you've probably noticed I prefer the ryhming style, though I do have I think 5 that don't.
But we both know we cannot be
Our relationships together never last
They come and go all so fast
It's hard to be friends with lust in our eyes
And I know if we act upon it, it will end in lies
Being around him is such a pleasurable pain
I need to leave him before he drives me insane
But I can't let go, I'll never be free
Because my love for him will always be part of me
As promised another poem about missing my beloved ex. You know most normal people write hate poems about their ex boyfriends/girlfriends, but not me. I guess that's because I'm still friends with Morgan (and because I'm unwillingly madly in love with him). Yeah so this poem is much more true about my relationship with Morgan, compared to my last poem about him. I don't like this one so much just because it doesn't flow very well, but that's because I was on my period and trying desperately to make things ryhme. As you've probably noticed I prefer the ryhming style, though I do have I think 5 that don't.
posted by Em at 2:03 PM
2 Comments:
Ahh, this sounds so you. :P
"It's hard to be friends with lust in our eyes"
I think that's just another one of those word choice lines... Plus it flows well.
"Because my love for him will always be part of me"
I just like that one 'cause it's true. First love, right? Yeah, it always will be a part of you. I can truthfully say that I am no longer in love with my first love, but yeah, it's still a special thing. Closure works wonders, though. Closure, for me, being that she was completely and madly in love with somebody else about a month after we were over. :/
Anyway, overall it is a pretty good poem. Like you said, the flow could be a bit better, but the words make up for that for the most part.
Lol, you're right that does sounds very me and I love how you can tell that.
I read your reply to my comment on your blog about Morgan and I. I agree he's not the best thing for me, but what can I do? He's one of my very best friends, I love him to death, I can't let him go. Plus, he's not letting go very well either which does nothing for closure. I kinda hope it stays that way too.
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