Through My Eyes
I see the world through blurred eyes
I cannot stop these tears I cry
My life is pain, lose, and jelousy
Darkness resides in every part of me
I cannot find hope or love
Sadness is the only thing I see much of
People don't understand my loneliness
They can't see my hearts emptiness
So to see the world through my eyes
Is to see it from a darker side
This is another one of my favorites, mainly because of the first two and the last two lines. I really like how those sound. This was originally planed to be my introduction poem but I couldn't fit in the line "Dark emotions are all that's left of you". Now this poem is a very good example of exagerating, but that's because I was trying to get it to invole everything that all my poems talked about because it was supposed to be an introduction poem. My life seriously is not that dark and gloomy. But I do cry a lot and I deffently don't tend to look on the bright side a lot.
I cannot stop these tears I cry
My life is pain, lose, and jelousy
Darkness resides in every part of me
I cannot find hope or love
Sadness is the only thing I see much of
People don't understand my loneliness
They can't see my hearts emptiness
So to see the world through my eyes
Is to see it from a darker side
This is another one of my favorites, mainly because of the first two and the last two lines. I really like how those sound. This was originally planed to be my introduction poem but I couldn't fit in the line "Dark emotions are all that's left of you". Now this poem is a very good example of exagerating, but that's because I was trying to get it to invole everything that all my poems talked about because it was supposed to be an introduction poem. My life seriously is not that dark and gloomy. But I do cry a lot and I deffently don't tend to look on the bright side a lot.
posted by Em at 5:46 PM
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GRRRR!!!!! Stop spaming!!! I don't have high colestrole, I don't have a penis, and since I crashed my car I don't want to buy car parts! So unless you have something to say about my poetry don't leave me comments!
Definately sounds like an intro poem.
"I see the world through blurred eyes"
Ehm... That's actually the line that kind of sort of inspired that first stanza of mine that you liked so much. Well, the first line, anyway.
"People don't understand my loneliness
They can't see my hearts emptiness"
This is probably my favorite line out of these. Again, not quite sure why. I just like it.
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